I have a classmate whose name is Wiwiet Wulandari.I usually call her 'Wiwiet'.Wiwiet is a creative girl because she is a good drawer.Drawing is prove to be one of her hobbies.She likes drawing an anime,for it has many unique and cute characters.Her favourite characters are Naruto and Sinichi Kudo.If she draws it,she can forget her problems.She ever talked to me that she has many dreams.One of her dreams is she wants to make a manga comic.That is a story about my creative classmate.I hope our friendship will be a sweetiest relation forever.
Wiwiet is a creative girl is topic
She is a good drawer is controling idea
Hi, Ari...
BalasHapusWould you mind if I left a comment?
Because the word 'sweetiest' in last sentence is superlative, I think it must be with the article 'the'.
So there's should be: the sweetiest
hallo zahiraa.. how r u doing..??
BalasHapusnice writing dear..
the word "sweetiest" shouldn't it be "the sweetest" ??
if that word a superlative form of "sweet", then it must be "sweetest" not "sweetiest" right ! :)
ohya, u tried to use passive sentence there, don't forget to put past participle (v3) right after (to be)
"drawing is proved to be..."
anime --> animation
good to read ur writing.. (n_n)
wish my comment is right..
It's awesome ur buddies help me giving comments:-). That's the function of blog then..u can monitor ur friend's writing too. By doing that, u actually monitor ur writing ability as well, for the comment u make represents ur understanding of grammar, vocabulary, and any other aspects related to produce better writing.
BalasHapusWell, it's surely nice writing as u can develop ur topic sentence well. However, other little things should also be considered, not only for the writer but also for the commentators, hehe. Mind ur grammar, "would u mind if I 'leave'..., U also hafta pay a heed to S-V agreement, and the choice of words! Well, Ika already corrected the word 'prove', but the idea remains 'unclear' even if the word grammatically corrects. Please, look for proper word to support ur opinion. Can't wait to see ur magnificent writing next time. Good.
wait, ZAHIRA??? Why does Ika call u so?? Is it another name of yours?
BalasHapusthanks my beloved friends for your comment.. :)
BalasHapusthanks miss fika for your comment i will try to improve my writing skill to be better.. :)
yes,zahira is my another name and i call hika is almira.
hhee..
:D
@Hika:
BalasHapusOh My Godness.
I'm forget about the adjective of word 'sweet'
So sorry. Thanks Hika..
@Miss Refika.....
If I write the sentence:
'Would you mind if I left a comment?' Is it wrong?
Because as far as I know, the formulas is:
'Would you mind if I +V2'
Thanks in advance, Miss.. ;)
Soap opera addict:-DDD
BalasHapusEr, please recheck ur formula, dear. It's followed by V1:-)